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Post by AndroM31-da! on Jul 27, 2017 9:41:21 GMT
"A cute Len'en story" is a cute story involving characters from Len'en! You could call this a fanfic of sorts. Anyway, I began writing this because I was about to die from boredom.
I wrote them on DA and always post them to the Len'en Project group, so if you have an account, you can find and read it there!
In case you are lazy, I'll provide you the links.
Idiotic Bird Arc (α)
A - Snake Wine
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
B - Riddle
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
C - Suspicion
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
D - Rotting Bird
Part 13
Part 14 Part 15Part 16 Part 17Part 18Part 19
E - Deception
Part 20
Part 21Part 22F - Chain LinkPart 23Part 24Part 25Part 26G - Black SwanPart 27Part 28Part 29H - Coup de MainPart 30Part 31Part 32Part 33It's not finished yet, I'll update this thread once in a while when I finish writing the next part. Oh, this is supposed to be a challenge for an English learner like me, so... if there's any mistake, inform me. However, there are exceptions... some mistakes are major plot points.
(Are you doubting the title? Well, you never know unless you read it.) (If you know... don't spoil it to other readers...)
Enjoy your read.
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Fuma Mishandra
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You may turn back time as much as you like...if you're prepared for the consequences, that is.
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Post by Fuma Mishandra on Aug 5, 2017 5:10:40 GMT
This story's really exciting so far! Or maybe I should say...really c u t e ~ ?
Looking forward to future parts~ <3
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Post by Suzumi on Sept 7, 2017 10:49:51 GMT
I wait till it's get further~ by the way. Nice Work
Edit:
So nun schreibe ich mal, was ich über die Geschichte denke. Ich finde diese Geschichte sehr interessant und sehr gut Geschrieben. Die Spannung wird aufgebaut und auch oben gehalten. Hin und wieder bekommt man Denk Anstöße und kann munkeln wer der Täter war. Da ich noch ein Anfänger in English bin, ist es sehr interessant für mich zu lesen und auch zu merken wo ich noch Probleme im Verstehen habe. ich freue mich das es bald weiter geht und ich somit die Chance habe mich im Lesen und auch im Schreiben zu Verbessern.
Was mir an der Geschichte gefällt:
Die Charaktere, ich kenne noch nicht alle und hier habe ich die Chance zu sehen wie sie miteinander interagieren können, wie sie sich Verhalten könnten.
und das es in Kapiteln aufgebaut ist und man so immer wieder nachprüfen kann: was weiß ich noch von dem vorigen Kapitel
Eng:
So now I'll write what I think about the story. I find this story very interesting and very well written. The voltage is built up and also held up. Every now and then one gets thought-proving and can mumble who the perpetrator was. Since I am still a beginner in English, it is very interesting for me to read and also to remember where I still have problems in understanding. I'm looking forward to it soon and I have the chance to improve my reading and writing skills.
What I like about the story:
The characters, I do not know yet and here I have the chance to see how they can interact with each other, how they could behave.
and that it is built up in chapters and one can always check it again: what do I know of the previous chapter?
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Post by AndroM31-da! on Oct 17, 2023 9:05:51 GMT
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Post by 011sunayn on Dec 30, 2023 21:34:29 GMT
Cutest story ever
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