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k1g4n3
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A cute Len'en story! Jul 27, 2017 9:41:21 GMT

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Post by k1g4n3 on Jul 27, 2017 9:41:21 GMT

"A cute Len'en story" is a cute story involving characters from Len'en!
You could call this a fanfic of sorts.
Anyway, I began writing this because I was about to die from boredom.

I wrote them on DA and always post them to the Len'en Project group, so if you have an account, you can find and read it there!

In case you are lazy, I'll provide you the links.

Idiotic Bird Arc (α)

A - Snake Wine

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

B - Riddle

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

C - Suspicion

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

D - Rotting Bird

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

E - Deception

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

F - Chain Link

Part 23

Part 24

Part 25

Part 26

G - Black Swan

Part 27

Part 28

Part 29

H - Coup de Main

Part 30

Part 31

Part 32

Part 33

It's not finished yet, I'll update this thread once in a while when I finish writing the next part.
Oh, this is supposed to be a challenge for an English learner like me, so... if there's any mistake, inform me. However, there are exceptions... some mistakes are major plot points.

(Are you doubting the title? Well, you never know unless you read it.)
(If you know... don't spoil it to other readers...)

Enjoy your read.

Last Edit: Jul 15, 2018 9:43:51 GMT by k1g4n3

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Wind
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A cute Len'en story! Jul 28, 2017 4:47:35 GMT

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Post by Wind on Jul 28, 2017 4:47:35 GMT

Ah, so you're the author of "A Cute Len'en Story". I've enjoyed following it so far, curious as to what the story will lead to.

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Fuma Mishandra
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A cute Len'en story! Aug 5, 2017 5:10:40 GMT

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Post by Fuma Mishandra on Aug 5, 2017 5:10:40 GMT

This story's really exciting so far! Or maybe I should say...really c u t e ~ ?

Looking forward to future parts~ <3

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Suzumi
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A cute Len'en story! Sept 7, 2017 10:49:51 GMT

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Post by Suzumi on Sept 7, 2017 10:49:51 GMT

I wait till it's get further~ by the way. Nice Work

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So nun schreibe ich mal, was ich über die Geschichte denke. Ich finde diese Geschichte sehr interessant und sehr gut Geschrieben. Die Spannung wird aufgebaut und auch oben gehalten. Hin und wieder bekommt man Denk Anstöße und kann munkeln wer der Täter war. Da ich noch ein Anfänger in English bin, ist es sehr interessant für mich zu lesen und auch zu merken wo ich noch Probleme im Verstehen habe. ich freue mich das es bald weiter geht und ich somit die Chance habe mich im Lesen und auch im Schreiben zu Verbessern.

Was mir an der Geschichte gefällt:

Die Charaktere, ich kenne noch nicht alle und hier habe ich die Chance zu sehen wie sie miteinander interagieren können, wie sie sich Verhalten könnten.

und das es in Kapiteln aufgebaut ist und man so immer wieder nachprüfen kann: was weiß ich noch von dem vorigen Kapitel

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So now I'll write what I think about the story. I find this story very interesting and very well written. The voltage is built up and also held up. Every now and then one gets thought-proving and can mumble who the perpetrator was. Since I am still a beginner in English, it is very interesting for me to read and also to remember where I still have problems in understanding. I'm looking forward to it soon and I have the chance to improve my reading and writing skills.

What I like about the story:

The characters, I do not know yet and here I have the chance to see how they can interact with each other, how they could behave.

and that it is built up in chapters and one can always check it again: what do I know of the previous chapter?

Last Edit: Oct 15, 2017 7:31:05 GMT by Suzumi

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k1g4n3
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「どうか誰か私に救いをくれる」

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A cute Len'en story! Oct 17, 2023 9:05:51 GMT

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Post by k1g4n3 on Oct 17, 2023 9:05:51 GMT

Back temporarily. I haven't written anything new yet due to irl stuff but I have compiled the existing chapters into one Google Doc:
docs.google.com/document/d/1Z8vyofO__gRTakOHoYUWtfmX_btWfmnBwweCvUcLq-Q/edit?usp=sharing

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iries_011
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A cute Len'en story! Dec 30, 2023 21:34:29 GMT

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Post by iries_011 on Dec 30, 2023 21:34:29 GMT

Cutest story ever

k1g4n3
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A cute Len'en story! Oct 16, 2024 11:57:10 GMT

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Post by k1g4n3 on Oct 16, 2024 11:57:10 GMT

Okay I'm writing this to confess that I literally forgot the plot of Len'en so unless I had time to reread/catch up on new story and information (which probably won't happen because I am too busy irl), there won't be an update anytime soon.

I do remember that I intended this "arc" to just be a beginning however, and it's reaching its end. Since god knows if I could continue this, I'm just gonna say what I planned when I was writing this (SPOILERS TEXT IN WHITE, SELECT ALL TO SEE):

The overarching plot of "A cute Len'en story" is Yabusame being trapped in a loop of failing to save Tsubakura. Every time a world "ends" (Tsubakura dying), Yabusame jumps to another Mugenri hoping to finally save Tsuba this time. Suzumi is the one forcing Yabusame to do this and for (unplanned) reasons takes away some crucial memories each loop. Current story is the first arc but it's certainly not the first loop. The "villain" of the first arc as already established, is Sanra and the Devanagara army. It doesn't mean they will always be the "villain" of the entire story, if this story somehow reaches the 2nd arc, you'll find out that the "villain" will be something else entirely. The term "villain" here is used to describe a force that has the most power to kill Tsubakura in a timeline. Anyways since it's the first arc, the ending is predictably gonna be Tsubakura dying. Events leading to that, I had given it some thoughts but of course not very detailed right now cuz if I do have ideas I'd have finished it already.

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iries_011
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A cute Len'en story! Oct 16, 2024 12:45:06 GMT via mobile

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Post by iries_011 on Oct 16, 2024 12:45:06 GMT

Hello Andromeda!!! Thank you for the small announcement. I really liked your story and at least having an answer to as whether you would continue this or not feels nice